I can't put my finger on it but there just seems to be something missing.
Try texturing that white column on the right side of the page with some screenshots and I'll review this again.
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Noticed a pattern with @Dis, it seems almost all his reviews are one star. Don't feel bad, just ignore his comments. -at least my stuff is safe from his inane chatter.
Fuck You
I'm glad you got all the zipping and posting stuff figured out. I played through both maps for a minute or so, and thought up a few points of improvement:
Avoid dead ends like the tunnel in Tower. The map should flow, not require you to turn around when you hit a wall.
Avoid paper thin walls like the one in Upstairs
Learn to merge your individual maps into map packs, to make playing them easier. You should also name your levels in your level editor.
Upstairs could use some more cover. Aside from the paperthin wall, you are a little exposed. This is nice for some parts of the map, but even Thunderdome and Route 66 have quiet areas.
People will be more interested in your maps if your add screenshots.
I hope this review is helpful. Keep mapping and working on your technique.
I'm speaking from a perspective of a solo player. Although I haven't seen these in action in any multiplayer games, I think the maps are built really well. They have great lighting and architecture. Big map looks fun to have 8 players in, and I can't wait to try any of them online!
Kinda laggy on my PC, but the glow is good.
...but not best. If you end up making a plugin, are you going to have to rename this to Radiance Plugins?
Screenshots would be nice to help illustrate the difference.
The Infinity shapes file contains the these wonderful characters in the filename -- [M?ê?]. I've had trouble using files like that in the past with Windows.
This is the greatest lua script ever!
These maps are really fun to play on! I really have a blast playing King of the Hill on Mind the Gap. I also like Warp and Weft a lot, because it's so trippy! You definitely have made improvements since first testing these maps. Nice work!
A very fun netpack to play, with a variety of great different sized netmaps for different amounts of players. It has some nice 7-poly maps too! I definitely recommend downloading this pack!
I got pictures, I just don't see it anymore Climbing hour upon hour through a total bore With the one I keep where it never fades In the safety of a pitch black mind An airless cell that blocks the day Oh well, okay
water nearby is a surefire map, there might be more things you could do to improve it, but none i can think of.
i dont really like your pfhormal writing map, but i guess its mainly because the pfhor texture set sucks in general.
for the rest of your maps, they are pretty dynamic and detailed, which makes them more fun and complex. the fact that many of them are symmetrical, however, tends to make it less interesting and less strategic.
your two newest maps are also very enjoyable both in looks and play. my only mild issue with "A Warm Feeling" was that it feels a bit stuffed... overall, this pack can probably be improved, but it is in excellent condition the way it is now.
good work...
This is Nib's map, he can't infringe on his own copyright. Btw dude, does that new switch behind the throne do anything?
... bloody, awesome, and bloody awesome. Campers, don't even think of playing these.
this one is really boring to play with! don't keep up the bad work
Tresh, everything you have created so far is shit. If you continue making physics, they will continue to be shit. There's enough shit on Simplici7y already, stop adding to it.
this one is really fun to play with! keep up the good work
Been playing these maps for quite a while and do enjoy them! The sounds could be a little better, but overall, worth playing!
im getting de ja vu, because it looks alot like another survival map. but other than that, it looks great for playing survival.
It's a good map, and enjoyed it. But I didn't notice until I used this map for a while that this map is almost exactly like another map I downloaded a few months ago. Interesting
I just wanted to say how little most people care for physics files. I have personal experience in this matter, or maybe everyone just hates me.