This is my first map, I hope you like it.(short) Now with screenshots.
Redesigned part of the map, added more ammo.Now with less suck!
Welcome to the fold.
1) Texturing. I found two untextured, glaring surfaces on the first quick try.
2) Weapons. Not enough on TC.
3) Detail and Variety. Very little differential shading and detail.
Goodish first try, though.