Make the map completely silent, and have it in vaccum, so you add another element to the game. gotta get oxygen if you're winning for a long time.

Scenery and sounds are needed

Good design

I suggest: invisible compliers fusion pistol & ammo

cool level, good movement and flow

Cool map, very fun

Good. now down to business, I hate your texturing. keep all sides of one area the same tex. show off your architecture with rounded texturing. like this: http://www.pfhorums.com/index.php?showtopic=4932&st=0#entry70092 also, where are the roving compilers and blinking lights? I DEMAND COMPILERS AND FLASHES! some of the platform blockers were just inlaid into the space... if you don't want to expand the bottom of the area, but have the platform stay the same, use a split poly. do it up to the height you like and then you know the drill. you get more space and more platform. try to use more than two guns, flamer would be nice, cause its good, but its short distance. put invisibility on this map! more long range guns, and less ammo for all. thank you, come again.

An interesting map. Needs some sounds and maybe some details outside the playing area.